Men dying from left to right
Many casualties in sight
Men taken each lives
And fleeing in fright
A battle like this
Was one thing for sure
July the 1st
The bloodiest war -+
Many daughters that cry
Plenty mothers that morn
On this forsaken day
Just acknowledge the corn
That the tide is turned
A lesson is learned
The north is powerful
Your town will be burned
A change in the war
Has just occurred
This is a change some
Couldn’t afford
Many casualties in sight
Men taken each lives
And fleeing in fright
A battle like this
Was one thing for sure
July the 1st
The bloodiest war -+
Many daughters that cry
Plenty mothers that morn
On this forsaken day
Just acknowledge the corn
That the tide is turned
A lesson is learned
The north is powerful
Your town will be burned
A change in the war
Has just occurred
This is a change some
Couldn’t afford
1 comment:
Well done. Your 3rd and 4th stanzas are particularly good. Just curious-what is corn slang for?
Can you think of a better title?
34/70 points. Missing second poem
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